domingo, 28 de octubre de 2007

Argumentative Essay

Can women victims of road rage?

Introduction:

First that all the women and the men are very different in many aspects of behavior, like feelings, methods of conduct and reactions for this reason the men are more furious and more impulsive to emotions in comparison with women, they are more cafeful when they´re driving moreover, the women are more affected than men.
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bogota streets are full of taxis and buses that produce a lot of noise and this fact increases bad mood in the women. Moreover, men´s way of driving and their behavior is also a result of the fear of women when they drive.
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On the other hand, there are many women that think that the traffic is not a problem because their behavior is more relaxed and drive like men.

martes, 23 de octubre de 2007

Constructing the Argumentative Essay

The following suggestion is targeted at the undergraduate student who writes several argumentative essays every semester, but who has never formally learnt how to do so and rarely takes the time to reflect on how it should be done. The suggestion takes the form of a model that highlights what one might expect to find in the three main parts of a good argumentative essay. As a model to help you reflect on what you are doing well and what you should be doing differently, it is necessarily categorical and systematic. In trying to master the model, you should not inadvertently become a slave to it. Otherwise, your essays will become rigid and sterile. Instead, use this as a mental checklist that you can build upon and even be playful with, developing in the process a confident, independent and original voice.

A. Introduction
1. Identify and state your objects of analysis.
The topic or question will often ask you to discuss central texts, key ideas or concepts, issues, or a combination of these.

2.Provide some background to the thesis and reveal the motive for arguing it.
An effective description of the context, situation or problem can demonstrate why the thesis is interesting and worth arguing. Here is your chance to convince your readers (including the marker) that your essay is worth reading—something not to be taken for granted!

3.Formulate and state your thesis.
A thesis is a clearly articulated general idea that expresses the main point you want to argue in your essay. It should be:

- Sufficiently focused and narrow so that it can be fully discussed in your essay;

-a position that is debatable, and dependent on the strength of evidence and logical development; not a simple statement of fact, a declaration of belief that cannot be reasonably substantiated, a tautological or circular expression, an obvious point, and so on;

-Interesting

4. Define the key terms, state the assumptions, and describe the methodology.
Key terms: You will often find terms in the question, topic or your thesis itself whose meanings are essentially contested or indeterminate or ambiguous because of colloquial misuse. These terms may be crucial in your larger analysis and, if for no other reason than this, must be defined (even tentatively) before you can hinge your arguments on them.

Assumptions: The set of fundamental ‘givens’ that make your arguments consistent, coherent, and meaningful can be stated at the start. This is sometimes done in the interest of intellectual honesty and to indicate to the reader where you might be coming from ideologically.

Research methodology: You may want to describe your main analytical approach (e.g. inter-disciplinary), the sources that you use in your analysis (e.g. archival material, literature reviews, internet forums) and how you obtained them (e.g. interviews, opinion surveys, regression analysis).

5.Sketch a roadmap.
If your thesis tells the readers where you want to take them in the journey that is your essay, a roadmap will tell them how they will get there—which main roads, turning points, and detours they can expect to take.

B. Body

1.Construct your arguments.
To develop your thesis, you will need to construct a series of smaller supporting arguments that are relevant to the thesis. While every argument should be directed to the thesis, the individual arguments should not simply be linked together as a random chain of implicitly related but distinct reasons. Instead, they should follow a coherent and logical sequence that builds up, often dramatically, to a convincing and satisfying restatement of the thesis in the conclusion.

Using clear topic sentences that state the main point of each paragraph can help you to be sensitive to the shape of your arguments. You should also think about how the arguments can come together to produce a dramatic build-up, going through various twists and turns, and allowing for conflicts, negotiations, and resolutions to play out. Other related considerations include a sense of timing (e.g. when to reveal certain arguments or facts, for dramatic effect) and proportion (e.g. how much space should be given to each argument).

2.Support your arguments with evidence.
Broadly speaking, you can support your arguments with empirical evidence in the form of facts, data, statistics, examples, controlled observations, and so on. You should not simply mention them; you should instead elaborate on them by giving details to be connected deliberately with the arguments being made. Also, you should try to give an indication of the reliability of your evidence. You can also support your arguments with academic and professional expertise that you cite or quote directly. To avoid plagiarism, you must cite your sources.

3.Deal with counter-arguments.
You will also need to imagine and anticipate reasonable objections to your thesis and the arguments developed around it. You will need to describe these objections fairly (i.e. don’t create straw men to be knocked down effortlessly). And you will then need to deal with them decisively, demonstrating the superiority of your argument (or some adjusted form of your argument). This not only strengthens your arguments, but also makes your essay more complicated and therefore more interesting.

4.Provide your reader with the necessary orientation.
It is always important to write with a clear sense of audience (i.e. ‘Who are you writing this for?’). Knowing who your readers are will give you a good idea of what kind and extent of background information you will need to provide before your ideas, arguments, and evidence can make full sense to the readers.

At the start of the journey, you provided readers with a roadmap. During the journey itself, you should provide clear signposts along the way to give readers a good sense of where they are in this journey. You might, for example, pause at critical junctures in the essay to inform readers about what you have done so far, where you are in the overall argument, and what you are going to do next.

C. Conclusion

1.Retrace your steps.
Once you have arrived at the conclusion, it is often a good idea to remind readers, in summary, where they have been. This is where your topic sentences can come in handy.

2.Restate your thesis.
If your arguments have been focused, strong and well developed, you can now confidently reassert your original thesis, or an adjusted or improved version of the thesis that has taken into account the counter-arguments dealt with along the way.

3.Point towards the wider significance of your essay.
This aspect is not altogether necessary for writing a good essay, and it may in fact severely weaken your essay if handled without skill. In any case, writers are usually advised not to introduce any ‘new’ ideas in the conclusion.

However, if you are indeed confident, you may want to consider including a few lines explaining what further implications your thesis might have for other similar or wider questions. You may even want to make recommendations for further study or for action (e.g. in the case of policy papers). And you may also want to try your hand at ‘scenario-painting’. Once again, be aware of the perils.

4.Make an impact with the final word.
Do not end your essay with a sentence that seems to have a ‘nice ring to it’, but in fact means nothing or is completely irrelevant to the arguments. Instead, you might want to end with a witty and relevant detail, illustration, recurring motif, quotation, or anecdote that may keep readers thinking about your essay long after they have read it.

Further Reading
Hacker, D. (1999). A Writer’s Reference (4th ed.). Boston: Bedford/St. Martin’s.
Harvey, G. (1998). Writing with Sources. Indianapolis/Cambridge: Hackett Publishing Company, Inc.
Tan, Kenneth P.A.S-S. (2003). ‘Writing the Argumentative Essay: Language and Style’. Successful Learning, Issue No. 36. Singapore: Centre for Development of Teaching and Learning, National University of Singapore.http://www.cdtl.nus.edu.sg/success/sl36.htm.

viernes, 19 de octubre de 2007

Security

Security in Colombia likes security in Alemania

The strategies that use each country are generally differents, for reasons like history, terrorist groups, Assaults from another countries and many reasons more, so each country takes care and defend of possible assaults, and they create a strategy for each need.
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In this case, with a country like Alemania, more that all it takes care from assaults from another countries because they consider that their country is a special point of reference for the terrorist countries, for this reason their strategy of security is based in the inmigrants, the safety in the borders and airports.
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Moreover a cause of the different strategies to defend is the technology that can use the country, the weapons for defend can be an important point of reference betwen a latinamerican country and a european country, because the objective isn´t the same, for example in a country is fighting against other country maybe with a tecnology more avanced, while in Colombia is fighting against a terrorism grouop that perhaps they have an obsolete technology to defend.

On the other hand for Colombia the strategy is fully different, in this country takes care from terrorism groups like "guerrilla and FARC", nowdays is very common listen about Humanitarian agreement a strategy to guarantee the nation´s peace.

In conclution each country has to guarantee the security for the nation, likewise create strategies to offset the crimes and the terrorism, planning these strategies with the need of each nation.

Security

Security Officials Promote Integration as Crime Prevention in Alemania


This link is about Alemania and its defend against the terrorism, and as a strategy focus on in the inmigrants, because this country becoming more and more a target of terrorist attacks and the foreign people can be influenced by religion or culture.

Security

Portugal, Intelligence and Security.

I post this link because it has the portugal security´s history, People who have intervened in the nation´s security and the kind of strategies and groups of control.

http://www.answers.com/topic/portugal-intelligence-and-security


Security


ETA Opts for 'Strategy of Confrontation' with France

In this web page you can read the strategy that ETA has with Europe´s countries , specially with France, and the actions to defend its national security. Also some terrorist actions that are made for ETA and the effects that those actions cause in people.

martes, 2 de octubre de 2007

TWIST IN THE TALE

Questions 1-7
Look at the following list of people A-E and the list of statements (Qustions 1-7) Match each statement with one of the people listed.
write the appropiate letters A-E in boxes 1-7 on your answer sheet.
1. Children take a pleasure in giving books to each other.
Answer: Jaqueline wilson. (D)
2. Reading in public is an activity that children have not always felt comfortable about doing. Answer: Wendy Cooling (A)

3. Some well-known writers of adult literature regret that they earn less than popular children´s writers.
Answer: David Almond (B)

4. Children are quick to decide whether they like or dislike a book.
Answer: Julia Eccleshare (C)

5.Children will read many books by an author that they like
Answer: Anne Fine (E)

6. The public do not realise how much children read today.
Answer: David Almond (B)
7. We are experiencing a rise in the popularity of children´s literature.
Answer: Wendy Cooling (A)
Questions 8-10
Using no more that three words taken from the reading passage, answer the following questions.
8. For which agre group have sales of books risen the most?
Answer: 8-14 Years
9. Which company has just invested heavily in an unpublished children´s book?
Answer: Orion Company
10. Who is currently the best-selling children´s writer?
Answer: Rowling
Questions 11-14
Which paragraph mentions the following (Questions 11-14)?
Write the appropiate letters (A-J) in boxes 11-14 on your answer sheet.
11. The fact that children are able to identify and discuss the important elements of fiction.
Answer: (D)
12. The undervaluing of children´s society
Answer: (H)
13. The impact of particular fictional character on the sales of children´s books
Answer: (C)
14. An inaccurate forescast regarding the reading habits of children.
Answer: (A)
Questions 15-21
From the list of headings below chooose the most suitable heading for each paragraph. Write the appropiate nimbres (i-xi) in boxes 15-21 on your answer sheet.
15. Paragraph A (xii)
16. Paragraph B (iv)
17. Paragraph C (i)
18. Paragraph D (viii)
19. Paragraph F (ix)
20. Paragraph G (vi)
21. Paragraph H (ii)