The Social problem of Medellin
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On the other hand one of the causes in the social problem of Medellin is the mafia, but when we tell about this topic we have to speak around of Colombia, it’s true that mafias make advantage with the fragility of people more poor and vulnerable of Medellin like those places usually excluded for the violence. The violence in Medellin and around Colombia in some ways it isn’t only for the mafia, also people need psychological treatment and help of everybody and it exists another causes like the poor, the sexual violence, the oversight from the government and many things more that they produce all this problems in the city of the eternal spring.
Continue of the grupal essay
On the other hand one of the causes in the social problem of Medellin is the mafia, but when we tell about this topic we have to speak around of Colombia, it’s true that mafias make advantage with the fragility of people more poor and vulnerable of Medellin like those places usually excluded for the violence. The violence in Medellin and around Colombia in some ways it isn’t only for the mafia, also people need psychological treatment and help of everybody and it exists another causes like the poor, the sexual violence, the oversight from the government and many things more that they produce all this problems in the city of the eternal spring.
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You need to include more vocabulary that describe situation of the mafia, and connectors.
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